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Thursday, April 12, 2012

....the last few words, before i call it a DAY!!!!!!!

Well, i was just sitting in my room.. thinking bout ‘someone’ special that we all wish for at some point of time in our lives!! Dunno how she s gonna be.. is she gonna be someone who s so very like you or the exact opposite ...coz as they say’ opposites attract!’ i really dunno... and truly so; as me and Nagesh discussed it in the cab[ Nagesh is my junior in cvts and we were going to Shalimar to satisfy our ‘sinful’ appetite!!!...] as cvts guys.. who has the time to spare, sit and stare!! leave aside lookin for one and then meeting up! phew! that s just too much to expect from us! right!!

Then as i tried to channel my wandering mind into doing something more fruitful, i came across this amazing piece which i thought i should share..simply coz its too good, too heart-rending, too poignant, too heart breaking, too emotional and maybe too bad coz it ended the way it did...

I admit that i am a MCP at times!! [but a milder version..ok!] That was one of the reasons’ why i counselled all the gals who wanted to take up surgery to do radio/ ob-gyn/ opthal /skin /psych /anaes/ peds.. and inspite of all that coercing when one of them said-“sir, i wanna do CVTS like you!”.. i just felt like pulling myself apart! ..but why am i talking bout my persona here..let it be..sorry folks!!!!!.... let me quickly take you through the article that i wanted you to read.. its a long one, will take 5 mins out of your valuable life.. but i suggest that its worth it.. so go ahead... here it comes....!!





“When I got home that night as my wife served dinner, I held her hand and said, I’ve got something to tell you. She sat down and ate quietly. Again I observed the hurt in her eyes.

Suddenly I didn’t know how to open my mouth. But I had to let her know what I was thinking. I want a divorce. I raised the topic calmly. She didn’t seem to be annoyed by my words, instead she asked me softly, why?

I avoided her question. This made her angry. She threw away the chopsticks and shouted at me, you are not a man! That night, we didn’t talk to each other. She was weeping. I knew she wanted to find out what had happened to our marriage. But I could hardly give her a satisfactory answer; she had lost my heart to Jane. I didn’t love her anymore. I just pitied her!

With a deep sense of guilt, I drafted a divorce agreement which stated that she could own our house, our car, and 30% stake of my company. She glanced at it and then tore it into pieces. The woman who had spent ten years of her life with me had become a stranger. I felt sorry for her wasted time, resources and energy but I could not take back what I had said for I loved Jane so dearly. Finally she cried loudly in front of me, which was what I had expected to see. To me her cry was actually a kind of release. The idea of divorce which had obsessed me for several weeks seemed to be firmer and clearer now.

The next day, I came back home very late and found her writing something at the table. I didn’t have supper but went straight to sleep and fell asleep very fast because I was tired after an eventful day with Jane. When I woke up, she was still there at the table writing. I just did not care so I turned over and was asleep again.

In the morning she presented her divorce conditions: she didn’t want anything from me, but needed a month’s notice before the divorce. She requested that in that one month we both struggle to live as normal a life as possible. Her reasons were simple: our son had his exams in a month’s time and she didn’t want to disrupt him with our broken marriage.

This was agreeable to me. But she had something more, she asked me to recall how I had carried her into out bridal room on our wedding day. She requested that every day for the month’s duration I carry her out of our bedroom to the front door ever morning. I thought she was going crazy. Just to make our last days together bearable I accepted her odd request.

I told Jane about my wife’s divorce conditions. . She laughed loudly and thought it was absurd. No matter what tricks she applies, she has to face the divorce, she said scornfully.

My wife and I hadn’t had any body contact since my divorce intention was explicitly expressed. So when I carried her out on the first day, we both appeared clumsy. Our son clapped behind us, daddy is holding mommy in his arms. His words brought me a sense of pain. From the bedroom to the sitting room, then to the door, I walked over ten meters with her in my arms. She closed her eyes and said softly; don’t tell our son about the divorce. I nodded, feeling somewhat upset. I put her down outside the door. She went to wait for the bus to work. I drove alone to the office.

On the second day, both of us acted much more easily. She leaned on my chest. I could smell the fragrance of her blouse. I realized that I hadn’t looked at this woman carefully for a long time. I realized she was not young any more. There were fine wrinkles on her face, her hair was graying! Our marriage had taken its toll on her. For a minute I wondered what I had done to her.

On the fourth day, when I lifted her up, I felt a sense of intimacy returning. This was the woman who had given ten years of her life to me. On the fifth and sixth day, I realized that our sense of intimacy was growing again. I didn’t tell Jane about this. It became easier to carry her as the month slipped by. Perhaps the everyday workout made me stronger.

She was choosing what to wear one morning. She tried on quite a few dresses but could not find a suitable one. Then she sighed, all my dresses have grown bigger. I suddenly realized that she had grown so thin, that was the reason why I could carry her more easily.

Suddenly it hit me… she had buried so much pain and bitterness in her heart. Subconsciously I reached out and touched her head.

Our son came in at the moment and said, Dad, it’s time to carry mom out. To him, seeing his father carrying his mother out had become an essential part of his life. My wife gestured to our son to come closer and hugged him tightly. I turned my face away because I was afraid I might change my mind at this last minute. I then held her in my arms, walking from the bedroom, through the sitting room, to the hallway. Her hand surrounded my neck softly and naturally. I held her body tightly; it was just like our wedding day.

But her much lighter weight made me sad. On the last day, when I held her in my arms I could hardly move a step. Our son had gone to school. I held her tightly and said, I hadn’t noticed that our life lacked intimacy. I drove to office…. jumped out of the car swiftly without locking the door. I was afraid any delay would make me change my mind…I walked upstairs. Jane opened the door and I said to her, Sorry, Jane, I do not want the divorce anymore.

She looked at me, astonished, and then touched my forehead. Do you have a fever? She said. I moved her hand off my head. Sorry, Jane, I said, I won’t divorce. My marriage life was boring probably because she and I didn’t value the details of our lives, not because we didn’t love each other anymore. Now I realize that since I carried her into my home on our wedding day I am supposed to hold her until death do us apart. Jane seemed to suddenly wake up. She gave me a loud slap and then slammed the door and burst into tears. I walked downstairs and drove away. At the floral shop on the way, I ordered a bouquet of flowers for my wife. The salesgirl asked me what to write on the card. I smiled and wrote –‘I’ll carry you out every morning until death do us apart.’

That evening I arrived home, flowers in my hands, a smile on my face, I run up stairs, only to find my wife in the bed -dead. My wife had been fighting CANCER for months and I was so busy with Jane to even notice. She knew that she would die soon and she wanted to save me from the whatever negative reaction from our son, in case we push through with the divorce.— At least, in the eyes of our son—- I’m a loving husband….

The small details of your lives are what really matter in a relationship. It is not the mansion, the car, property, the money in the bank. These create an environment conducive for happiness but cannot give happiness in themselves.

So find time to be your spouse’s friend and do those little things for each other that build intimacy. Do have a real happy marriage!







Yup , true thinking bout marriage does give me those jitters! And i ve seen quite a few of them turn sour and so i tend to be a lil afraid of how things gonna shape up on my personal front! in a world complicated by multiple hook ups, pre marital intimacies and woes..not to mention those extra marital flings, as this piece of work just described.. true the best part of our lives are long forgotten in return for some of the short time sinful pleasures!!!! sad..

This story reminded me of my two of my favourite novels- PS-I LOVE YOU by Cecelia Ahern and LOVE STORY by Erich Segal.. read them if you haven’t to savour those delicacies of life... something called eternal LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!



10 comments:

Komal Kanitkar said...

This one is one of d best I've read ever!!

U've put it up so well..
Specially in today's world where hook-ups n break-ups can happen in a split of a second, this article is sooo much for all...!!!
Really liked!

khushbu said...

Its soo touching...
Really liked it... :)

Tangled up in blue... said...

Sir this is such a remarkable coincidence! I read this just today morning as someone had put it up on facebook. First I thought it was a little bit unrealistic and corny but then I thought about it and I realised that we really take for granted the people that we love, so much so that we may not even realise that we are hurting them at times - in fact I think we end up hurting the people that we love the most of all. And it is true that a lot of real-life love stories in the world don't have a happy ending like in books and films but I really think that we all have one person in our life who we can call the 'love of our life'. We may or may not spend our entire lives with that person but it is because of that person that we start to believe in our capacity to love.

Oh, I am rambling on too much. I should stop now or my comment will become as big as the post. But Sir, I dont think you are an MCP! I have seen some real MCPs in our college, and you are too nice as compared to them! :D

And have you seen the movies Before Sunrise and Before Sunset? They are really the epitome of romance and the concept of soulmates is explored so beautifully in them. You must watch them! And even better if you watch with that 'special someone'! :)

swarup said...

@komal-yup, i had t same feelin on readin this one! second ur statement absolutely!
@khushbu-danke gute fraulein!
@karishma- yup, remarkably well said! i havent watched those movies but wil try n c them soon...and ur comments re always a pleasure.. so keep writin!!!!!!!

kislay said...

wondrful sir. love never dies. its just about loving and caring little things of ur partner.
very well stated by u tat
money , wealth
cant give ur marriage a health.

pallavi said...

Love...most beautiful word of this world. But most difficult to understand...or may be people don't try to understand. It's painful to see that people have lost faith it it. Why so? No one has an answer for this. But i believe that if you find true love ever in your life, please don't let it go... strive for it...!
Wonderful blog sir... :))))

Shraddha said...

Nice story. but such unconditional love is probably rare.

And you do have guts to call yourself an mcp. Seriously, is it true?

Btw, it would be better if you wrote a story on your own next time (ref: Ashli, internal affairs). Those posts are a better read than this one.

swarup said...

@kislay- thank u.. as always!
@pallavi- all tat lecture on luv n all will fetch u a distinction if u get tat as a long quest in ur upcomin examz
@shraddha- the reason y i put up this one is simply bcoz it appealed to me a lot! and i wanted to lay hands whenever i felt like readin it..therefore u ll find it here! and yes.. a new story s comin up soon..

Unknown said...

Extremely touching... My eyes were moist as I read the climax...but most of the times its very late till people realise the importance of the special one

Unknown said...

In the end its rightly concluded,
No luxury, status can buy u a true love,
unconditional love n respect towards ur partner... being together in thick n thins....can save the innocence bond of margg...
hookups can only work 4 few days....
n the movement v realise true love 4 that special 1 ....just listen 2 ur heart...bcoz time is precious...